TERRIBLE BICYCLE
I want to tell about unforgettable experience from Siti. Siti have a father and a mother whom love her so much. On her 5th birthday, Siti’s parents held birthday party in their house. Her father bought her a new bicycle as the present for her birthday. She was very happy.
She came to ride it, but she couldn’t ride it. She studied harder to ride a new bicycle more than before. By the time, she tried to ride it again. She learned a new bicycle alone. She brought her bicycle on the large field. But, she felt so confused how to ride the bicycle. She tried to ride a new bicycle carefully, but she fell from her bicycle again and again. She cried very loud.
Then, she went home while cried. She stepped on dog’s tail. So, the dog angried and chased Siti. Fortunately, Siti’s father came and helped her. The dog left Siti and her father.
Finally, she went home with her father and took her bicycle that she was left in the field.
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That's story is very funny in Sity childhood, i think Sity is children who brave and independent. This story is very clear for understood, but in some sentence will be better if you change, like "She came to ride it, but she couldn’t ride it". to "she wanted to ride a bike, but he can not drive".
BalasHapuslet's learn more, so that we can become better :)